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PostSubject: shizen kokenta   Tue Dec 06, 2011 12:53 pm

Name: shinzen kokenta
Alias: music king, rock god, lord of the strings
Visual/Suggested Age: 18 (1800 years old)
Actual Age: 1800
Gender: male
Looks: has purple eyes, spiked up blue hair, and a strong tanned skin
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xXPersonal InformationXx

Personality: his good qualities, are music play, his kindness and looks. where as his bad looks are he hates reconnosence, and hates anyone messing with his hair. Like his bad qualities, his weakness is hair and mainly distracted by his instruments mainly his guitar.
Likes: music, sweet and sour foods
Dislikes: being annoyed and poked when in the zone (his musical momentum)
Code: to rock out the enemy, whether they like it or not

History: His history was very tragic as his whole clan of music users was slaughtered he saw the killers were a group of arrancars. Thus making him the one and only god of rock. He used to be happy and have a good attitude, now he hates any new person in a squad or people he has to meet. At the age of ten he met a shinigami and he agreed to train him. At the age of fourteen he met his first hollow, a large green ogre with a spiked mask and a hole in its hand, but the shinigami protected him. shizen looked in amazment wanting to be just as strong and fast.

At the age of fifteen a shinigami left him knowing his job was done, he left so he could train more and more. On his sixteenth he learned his zanpaktou's name and learned his shikai he was so happy that day almost the first time he was happy for years. He continued to train to gain more speed and strengh. But on his seventeenth, he would go somwhere that would change his life forever.

On his seventeenth the other shinigami found shizen and at that moment he seemed worried, scared almost like an enemy was there, in seconds a gillian appeared but before it could use a cero it was sliced in two by a strong sound wave. The shinigami turned to see that shizen's blade was a long katana with strings on it. They decided to take him to the soul academy and see if they would allow him to join.

At the age of eighteen he joined the soul reapers still waiting to join a squad. However his hatred to reconascense is bad and still hates it to this day, but he still likes to fight more gillains. soon he will be ready to fight and challange the arrancar's, the group he calls bueos de muertos (day of dead).

Family: all deceased (saw them die with his own eyes)
Loyalties: the unknown shinigami: to this day he dont know know his name, all he remembered was a cold stare, a hood and a long scimetar for his zanpaktou. He was a shady person never showing his face and never said his name.
• Personal Items: a guitar (normal)

xXStatisticsXx



Battles:

Fights Won: 5
Fights Lost: 10

Missions Completed: 4

Successful: the gillain invasion, conquering an arrancar, reconnoscence part A, reconnoscene part B
Failures: none

Level: 30

Basic stats:

Stamina: 29/200
Power: 20/200
Speed: 40/200
Reiatsu: 50/200
Total: 139

Sub Stats:

Zanjutsu Skill: 55 /100
Zanpaktou Mastery: 60/100
Kido Intelligence: 40/100
Shunpo Speed: 50/100
Total: 185

xXTechniquesXx



Kidou:


Hadou:
hado number 1: sho (thrust)
hado number 4:byakurai (pale lightning)

Bakudou:
Bakudou number 1: sai (restrain)
Bakudou number 4 hanaiwa (crawling rope)

Custom Kidou:
bakudou number 34: budha drumb - the user summons a 2-d picture of a budha that pats his belly and absrobs incomming energy, only sound waves and attacks that pierce can penetrate it (soifon's shikai for example) last for about 1 turn can only be used twice.

bakudou number 35: music destortion- budha drumb changes to a large amount of sound notes with spikes that spin and goes faster then link a chain around the enemy and explode (enemy shunpo speed must be higher then 50) it can only be used after budha drumb

bakudou number 39: lightning rod (only in bankai) when in bankai, his guitar is shocked and forms a lightning barrier around his body, only earth or strong based attcks can go through (power must be higher then 35)

hadou number 30: fusion grenade (in shikai) when in shikai, two music notes connect and spins till it forms a blurry orb of white energy and kicks it to the enemy and explodes

Custom Techniques: sound perception: has the hearing twice that of any other shinigami, can hear a bala from miles away.
xXZanpaktouXx


Zanpaktou Name: engi goshujin songu, ongaku kingu
Zanpaktou Meaning: play your song, music king
Zanpakuto Type: sound waves, and sounds
Zanpakuto Shikai Release Form: The cloak turns to a top and he gets a saint christophers pendent, his hair goes long and he gets a black guitar with a silver bat on it, and baggyjeans. In this form his speed and sound perception increases twice as much (2 x the original speed) and his attack increases by 3 xs as much (3x power)

Zanpakuto Bankai Release Form: a leather jacket, makeup under eyes, spikier hair, an elecctric guitar, as well as a bass on his back, a pair of spiked shoulder pads and steel capped shoes and a ripped pair of jeans. (not yet achieved)

shizen (original form)

shizen (shikai)

area the spirit lives in the sky

spirit (soon to be bankai when learned)


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PostSubject: Re: shizen kokenta   Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:59 pm

Well Welcome Music-Rocker, I hope you enjoy your stay on the site. I have a few problems with your bio. One will be your level, you'll have to start at the starting levels. 1,30, or 50. Just realize if you make a level 50 character an rp sample will be needed.
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PostSubject: Re: shizen kokenta   Thu Dec 08, 2011 1:21 pm

is that better
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PostSubject: Re: shizen kokenta   Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:53 pm

Sorry for the lateness, I've read everything and saw some things that need to be changed. One is the length of history, second would be the history itself, Soifon and all other cannon bleach character's died long ago so it would be impossible for any of them to train your character. so some fixes towards that, three is your stats, you sub stats is 30 points higher. So you would have to fix that, last is could you talk about your character shikai, I'm not worrying about Bankai just yet, but could you talk about your shikai abilities. Also your custom kidous would have to be taken down since your character can know them yet, because you already have the max amount of kidou for your character to start off with, Also some information on the custom kidou would help us know the kidou, please do this in the Kidou creation and note if you have a 45 in Kidou mastery you can't have spells that exceed 45.
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PostSubject: Re: shizen kokenta   Sun Dec 11, 2011 5:13 am

KingHyuuga wrote:
Sorry for the lateness, I've read everything and saw some things that need to be changed. One is the length of history, second would be the history itself, Soifon and all other cannon bleach character's died long ago so it would be impossible for any of them to train your character. so some fixes towards that, three is your stats, you sub stats is 30 points higher. So you would have to fix that, last is could you talk about your character shikai, I'm not worrying about Bankai just yet, but could you talk about your shikai abilities. Also your custom kidous would have to be taken down since your character can know them yet, because you already have the max amount of kidou for your character to start off with, Also some information on the custom kidou would help us know the kidou, please do this in the Kidou creation and note if you have a 45 in Kidou mastery you can't have spells that exceed 45.

okay so in order i need

1 longar history
2 different history
3 sub stats (- 30)
4 disscussion about shikai
5 talking about kidou abbilities and none higher then 45
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PostSubject: Re: shizen kokenta   Sun Dec 11, 2011 1:50 pm

yes, the part on the history that needs to be changed is the training with soifon, you could talk more about your human life before you died.
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PostSubject: Re: shizen kokenta   Sun Dec 11, 2011 5:15 pm

KingHyuuga wrote:
yes, the part on the history that needs to be changed is the training with soifon, you could talk more about your human life before you died.

so the history is okay like it is now, or does it still need more
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