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PostSubject: Zane Hataro    Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:15 am

xXGeneral InformationXx

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Name: Zane Hataro
Alias: None
Visual/Suggested Age: 18
Actual Age: 520
Gender: Male
Looks: Normal- Zane is normally wearing a grey short-sleeve shirt, black pants that reach down to his ankles, a black leather jacket over the shirt, black shoes, and a grey sealing material over his right-arm. The seal reachs from his fingers all the way up to shoulder. Zane has a six pack of abs under his shirt and is fairly musculer under his clothing. Zane's entire right-arm has been permanently scarred with third degree burns making the skin look dark-red and have several markings from burns. His zanpakto has Shikai- No major changes in appearance aside the fact he now has two black zanpakto.
Bankai- A red armor covers his entire body making him look similer to the devil. There are two hornss at the top og the armor and teh only opening in the armor is a small opening infront of the eyes. This also makes him taller to be about sveen foot three.
Holllow Mask- When his mask is on, Zane's eyes turn yellow with a black pupal and his spiritual pressure becomes similer to a hollows. If used in bankai the mask forms under the armor.
Division: Leave this blank, an admin will tell you what rank and division your character is in based on its personality, abilities, and how well constructed the profile is. If your character is level 1, simply put Academy, as all characters beginning at level 1 must start there.


xXPersonal InformationXx

Personality: Lazy- Zane is somewhat a lazy person who hates doing much work unless it involves combat or he has something to gain from it. He also tends to sleep alot in his psare time. The only work he really ever does is train.
intellectual- Zane isn't the smartest of thsoe from teh Soul Society, but he is smarter then teh average shinigami and knows about most things reharding the Soul Society, World of the living, and Heuco Mundo.
Inconsiderate-Zane is a somewhat inconsiderate person who doesn't really care about people aside himself or his brother. He curses without any regard for what thsoe around him think and doesn't really give a dman about other people's problems much unless it is involved with something he is interested in.
Code of Honor- Zane has a code of honor that he follows most of the time in his life. He doesn't like to fight an unarmed opponent unless their speciality is fighting unarmed and doesn't resort to manyc heap tricks in combat unless needed.
Inner Hollow- Zane's inner hollow is a sadistic and nihilistic person who doesn't care how damaged he is. He just keeps fighting to kill his opponent by any means nessisary no matter what. He beleives teh weak desearve to die and must be exterminated from existence. He also doesn't like Zane much as he thinks even he is to weak to own his power. Zane's inner hollow also distributes this personality to Zane when the mask is activated, although Zane can still take back ovfer whenever needed.

Likes: Training, fighting, testing his limits,sleeping
Dislikes: Dishonorable fighters. Hollows. the Soul Society. Annoying noises . Being woke up.
Code: Zane is a honorable person, so he beleives in fighting fairly with his opponents and usually doesn't resort to any cheap shit.
History:Zane was born in the capital of Japan, Tokyo, formerly known as Edo during that time period. He was son to one of the emperor Oda's maidens and one of his frontline generals. He had lived with his mother through most of childhood up till age eight. At that time he began his training with his brother to join the Oda army in a later time period. He mainly trained in the arts of Kendo and sukan with the sword and spear. Over a five-year span, his training continue until the time came that he was recruited into the army as a corperal with his brother under the same battalion lead by his father. Zane praticipated in several battles until age 17 where things started to change. It was the battle of mitogawa and his father had been shot down by an ambush unit. He himself stayed to buy his brother,best friend from the army,and allys time to escape from the assault. He was kiled in the process obviously due to being highly out-numbered. ALthough, he did kill over thirty men before he fell and gave the others time to escape.
Zane awoke later attache3d to the site where he was killed. Everyone was gone now, and he was in some strange form. The form of a dead soul. He was lockied there with some type of chain and couldn't leave. After three months of solitude, he noticed tehc hain was getting smaller and smaller. Zane really didn't know what to think of it, so he just ignored it for the time being. by the fifth month the chain broke and Zane was turned into a gillian hollow.
As a gillian, Zane spent most of his time devouring the lost souls of dead spldiers and occasional ate a few other hollows. After a year in the war-feild, he moved to the Menos Forest to devour more hollows in his thirst for power. During his time as a gillian in the battle feild, he found out devouring hollows gave more power then mear souls. Eventually, Zane and a group of other hollows got in a klarge brawl and fused together into a Menos Grande.
Zane's willpower far surpassed that of the other hollows conjoined in the Menos, thus his personality toke over the thing. He then continued to feed and even more hollows and even some Menos for years until he entered the nexts tage of evolution.
Zane became an adjuhace and surpassed the strength of every other hollow in the forest making him the leader of the forest for the time being. He ordered sacrifices brought to him each day, or else he would go on blind rampage sin the forest, killing and devouring every hollow in sight.
After eating his ten thousandth hollow, Zane evoulved yet again into the most powerful of hollows. A vasto Lordes. As a vasto, Zane started to resurface to the living realm more often to devour more human souls. Hollow souls did indeed give more power to him, but the humans tasted far better. He fought many shinigami as well in the world and killed over twenty before he was confronted by one of the Captains. Zane thought it was just another shinigami and proceeded to attack. He was winning gaainst the soul reaper until they user bankai. The shinigami's zanpakto speciality was fire and burned Zane's entire body up to the third degree until teh shinigami finally ended it and decapitated him with their zanpakto. However, the hollow, as a last resort to live used it's special ability to seal itself inside the soul that was being transfered to the soul society because of the purification process
. It remained dorment for the time being.

Zane had lost all his memories of being a hollow once he arrived in the soul society and was rather confused about what had happened. He wondered aimlessly through rukongo, trying to find answers to the many questions he had. He found out quiet a few things, but none that he really cared for. After two months, Zane found his best-friend from the world of the living as a shinigami. From that point on his friend trained Zane into becoming a shinigami. It was a very long process, but by the ending result it was worth it. Zane never did learn anything about kido or care for it, but he learned alot about his zanpakto and shunpo skill. He had developed quickly in the art of shunpo, quickly surpassing his friend, and learned his shikai very quickly as well.

Zane was then assigned as third seat of squad 6 and served loyaly for over two-hundred years, always training to try and gain further power. On a friday afternoon, his friend had came at the door again, it had bene awhile since they spoke to eachother, so they naturally had a long conversation over what went on in the last two hundred years. By the end of the conversation, Zane's best-friend
, Hanzo had mentioned that he had obtained the power of bankai. Zane had always wanted to obtain bankai, but never knew how to obtain it and never thought of asking the captain for training, so he requested his friend to help him achieve bankai. His friend accepted and began the training quickly. There were many life-threatening test involved in trying to obtain his bankai, but after three-hundred years, he had finally unlocked it. The two then parted ways yet again.

It wasn't long before people found out of his abilities in bankai and he was promoted to captain of squad 11 for the time being. Although, after five years of being captain, he started having odd dreams. He dreamed he was a hollow killing shinigami and other hollows. it was indeed odd and he didn't know why he was seeing these things. Ten years later yet another unusual happening occured, he had the dream of being burned alive as a Vasto Lordes and actually felt the burns on his right-arm. The next morning when he awoke, his entire arm was scarred out of no where with third degree burns. He went to the medic area to try and have the arm healed, but it was ireversable by even the most advanced healing techniques.He later had a seal constructed by the 12th squad of Research and Development for his entire right-arm to seal away some of his high spiritual pressure and cover the scars of his arm.

Twenty years later, he heard a rumor that someone with a similer appearance had just been enstated in the sixth squad as ninteenth seat. He went to confrim this and found out it was his brother from back in the world of the living. He barely remembered anything about him since he was in the soul society so long, but he did manage to remember they were brothers, that was about it though. Zane toke his brother to private areas to train him to try and obtain shikai and bankai as well,.. By the time Zane was 700 his brother was framed as a traitor and a execution was ordered by the Soul Society.Zane found out what the hell had happened, His brother was dead and he was extremely angered and left the Soul Society the next night and vowed to destroy it for that incident alone.




Family: All dead
Loyalties: No one
Personal Items: His energy seal

xXStatisticsXx

Battles:

Fights Won:
Fights Lost:

Missions Completed:

Successful:
Failures:

Level: 70

Basic stats:

Stamina: 50/200
Power: 50/200
Speed:200/200
Reiatsu: 100/200 ( sealed Reiatsu 40/100)
Total: 400

Sub Stats:

Zanjutsu Skill:50 /100
Zanpaktou Mastery:100 /100
Kido Intelligence: 0/100
Shunpo Speed: 100/100
Total: 250

xXTechniquesXx
Kidou:

Hadou: None
Bakudou: None

Custom Kidou: None

Custom Technique



Name: After-Image
Type: Technique
Description: By moving at extreme speeds useing shunpo, the user leaves an after0image behind them that looks exactly like the original and even has it's own spiritual pressure until it vanishs in five seconds. Only stays a split second.
Requirements: 70 shunpo mastery
Stats Affected: None
Cost: Same as shunpo
Words to Train: None






xXZanpaktouXx

[u][b]Zanpaktou Name:
Raienzo
Zanpaktou Meaning: None
Zanpaktou Spirit:
Zanpaktou Realm: A barren wasteland with blood soaking the ground and the smell of death in the air.. Some corpses even fill the area. It is just an endless battlefeild like the one he had died at. It is a rough and roocky terrain with one mounntain at the center of the realm that reachs jalf a mile high and can be easily climbed. There is no life in the world aside Zane, his zanpakto spirit and Zane's inner-hollow.
Zanpakuto Type: Unclasified
Zanpakuto Shikai Release Form: Break apart and solidify.

Zane's shikai causes the blade to turn into a liquid state that covers his arms and legs then solidifies into a material made from miscellanious strong materials such as seki seki, diamond, and other things.. It retains the appearance of metal, even though it is only a low amount of it in it.

Slightly lower speed- Because of the material weighing more then a normal zanpakto it lowers his speed slightly. Subtract 20 speed and subtract 10 shunpo.
Enchanced strength- The material covering his arms and legs causes a high increase in durability as well as an increase in Zane's base strength. Add 20 power.
Spikes- This is the ability used to replace Zane's zanpakto. It allows him to shoot up to ten spikes from his arms or legs as sharp as a zanpakto to fight with or defend with. They can not move after shooting from the body, but after being reracted back into the body are able to shoot out at a different location. Costs 1 SP per spike shot out from the body and they can reach up to ten feet in length.


Zanpakuto Bankai Release Form: Sumiyake Akuma.

The material over his arms and legs spread out to cover his entire body like an armor. The helmet has two horns and the only opening is at the eyes The armor acts as a type of Heirro giving Zane incredible durability. His strength and speed are also highly raised. While in bankai he is also immune to reiatsu theft abilities and any type of deadly liquids due to the armor covering his skin as well. Zane can also create any weapon out of any material into his hands. The most lethal part of his bankai, is that he can shoot spikes out of any part of the armor just through a mental note. He can make up to thirty spikes at a time and they can reached up to thirty feet. The spikes can also be moved to curve and follow an opponent. The last ability of the armor is that after it has been damaged or destroyed, it will repair it self in two posts.

Extreme Durability- Because of the armor covering his entire body he is extremely hard to damage. The armor can take a point-blank cero without being destroyed and block most the damage of stronger attacks like gran rey cero making the impact on the user less deadly. Attacks costing 30 SP can highly damage the armor.
Spikes 2.0- Zane can now shoot out thirty spikes from his body that can move and curve to follow an opponent. These spikes can shoot out anywhere from the armor and are as strong as seki seki. They are made of the same materials as teh armor and can reech up to thirty feet in length While the spikes are out the armor becomes slightly weaker as a result. Cost 3 SP a post for every ten spikes in use.
Enchance strength- The armor now is furtherly infused with the user's body raising Zane''s strength drasticly. Add 50
Lower speed- Since teh armor covers more of his body it is even heavier and lowers his speed further. Subtract 40 and subtract shunpo speed by 15

xXRoleplay SampleXx

This doesnt need to be done unless your are applying for a high rank (level 30, 50, or 70). If the mods are familar with your rp skill then this will not be necessary. Three paragraph minimum.


Made this on Bleach Serenity for a fight with the cero espada

Dellapero looked at the damage he had inflicted to the man. It appeared as if he didn't even need to break the seal for this. Then again, it toke the captain commander to force him into that last time. He hadn't expected the next attack and was directly struck by all four balas. Dellapero was sent back a few feet farther back with part of his jacket torn apart from the blast. There was also a few burn marks along his stomache and chest. This was a good fight, but he needed to end it. "Not bad....Not bad at all...But, now is the time I end this...What you are about to see has only been seen by five people. As a ex espada I think you desearve to see it....I also suggest you use your ressurection soon or you might die...... said Dellapero in a calm tone.

Dellapero moved his left hand over thematerial on his right arm. He slowly descended down to the sand with the burns still hurting abit. He grabed the material and slowly started to pull it off his arm. As the skin was slowly showing many scars that were made from third degree burns could be seen. A red garganta instantly appeared behind him as he finally finished pulling off the glove and threw it in the portal before it closed. Three seconds later a black reiatsu started to cover his entire body. Every second it grew larger and moved faster for ten seconds then burst up in a giant wave of reiatsu sending waves of wind in every direction.

The sand sank beneath Dellapero from the high amonts of energy being unleashed. He moved his zanpakto upward and the reiatsu collected in the spikes along the hilt turning them black. Dellapero's spiritual pressure had highly increased from what it was before reaching extreme levels. He walked out of the dune his power created and looked at the ex cero espada. Dellapero spoke once more and looked the arrancar in the eye. 'This is my true power.....With it I plan on killing grimmjow and taking over the Espada to restore it to it's former glory. .





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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Tue Jul 20, 2010 9:18 pm

Hello, and Welcome to Seireitei a Bleach RPG, Zane.

If you still wish to rp this character at high rank, put in a request here.

Also, your profile looks good, but before it can be approved your rank request must be processed.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:36 pm

Edited the APP abit. Wanted use a different character. ANyway, I have a question. Can the boosts from shikai and bankai pass the 200 limit or is that for all forms? and I'm going to be a vizard, but keep the mask hidden until their unlocked. That ok?
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:00 pm

Yes, when you activate Shikai or Bankai, your reiatsu is restored to its maximum, and is then increased by 20 percent, or 100 percent respectively.

No, I'm afraid that wont work out. However, I assure you that it wouldn't make too much of a difference for your character as there will be a site-wide event that can turn select existing characters into Vizards. So if you still want this particular character to be a Vizard, he still can, just not for right now...

Your request is still being processed, but I'll start reviewing your profile now.

First- Your history. It is...unique, I'll say that much about it. I'm reluctant to outright say you need to redo it, so I'll talk with the other mods to see if we may grant you an exception. I will say however, that the whole having the same zanpakuto as your character's brother thing needs to go. We only canonize the Manga, and occasionally the Anime, if we like what they've done enough. OVAs and Bleach movie plotlines don't have any bearing on this site. So I'm afraid I'll have to ask you to change the part about having the twin zanpakuto conflict with the brother character. Other than that, it's good. Interesting, and it has a nice length.

Second- Your energy seal-thing. If it seals your total reiatsu by a specified amount, you need to put by what amount. Also, if it does seal some of your reiatsu, know that it would mean you would have less than 100 for your reiatsu. So put by what amount your reiatsu is sealed and when you rp, your SP gauge should reflect that.

Third- If your sure you want no kido at all, your stats are alright. Put your sub-stat total in please.

Fourth- Put your custom techniques in the correct format and post them here.

Fifth- Your Shikai makes this character virtually omniscient. Tone it down please. Also you say it makes you stronger and faster? By how much? Your stats will be affected by that. I suggest putting every separate ability your Shikai can perform in a technique format. If it makes you stronger and faster, make a technique for it. If it has some sort of detection ability, make a technique for it.

Sixth- Your Bankai and Shikai must relate to each other. As it stands, they have absolutely nothing in common. This needs to be fixed.

Seventh- Now I just reviewed your profile, but as your request for high rank hasn't been approved yet (I'm not the one reviewing it), know that you may still have to make modifications to this profile, as you made it as if you have already been granted captain rank.

Overall good job, some problems here and there but we want originality, and I'm glad you didn't go for some sort of tried cannon character rip-off. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Thu Jul 22, 2010 10:45 pm

Edited. I made the shikai match the bankai and I edite dmy stats abit.Just decided to change them while I have the chance b4 approval.

About the vizard thing. Removing the inner-hollow woukd ruin half the history. So, i will just have it stay dorment for now until they are unlocked. Is that ok?

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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:57 am

History-

"Zane toke his brother to private areas to train him to try and obtain shikai and bankai as well,.. By the time Zane was 700 his brother was framed as a traitor and a execution was ordered by the Soul Society.The Soul Society decided to have Zane's brother killed in a fight with his own brother Zane was poisoned iwth a type of drug to make him think the his brother was a hollow so that he would fight without holding back. Once the drug wore off and Zane found out what the hell had happened, His brother was dead and hee was extremely angered and left the Soul Society the next night and vowed to destroy it for that incident alone."

If he was framed well enough, then you may use that as an excuse to leave soul society. However please remove the part about Soul Society making you fight each other to the death...that's just barbaric...Soul Society is not evil, and the above scenario is just highly unlikely. That would just be TOO f****d up.

Shikai-

Slightly lower speed- This is ok. However add that your Shunpo speed is also lowered by 10 points.
Enchanced strength- Durability is fine, but you may only have a 25 point increase in strength. This is Shikai after all.
Spikes must cost SP. Put a distance limit on how far the spikes can travel.

Bankai- If you can breathe, you can still be affected by poisons and similar things.

Extreme Durability- Attacks that cost around 30 sp can damage the armor severely. Otherwise it's just too overpowered of a defense. Released weapon attacks can still damage this armor as long as the opponent's Zanpakuto Mastery is within 15 points of this characters. It's the same for everyone.
Spikes 2.0- How far do they reach? Must cost SP
Enchance strength- The strength increase may add 50 to the power stat. That would double your strength level at this point, which is appropriate for Bankai.
Lower speed- Hmm...Lower your speed by 40 please. Shunpo Speed also needs to be lowered by 15 points. You have on full body armor.

Understand that a Bankai like this coupled with your character's stats is on the verge of being overpowered. I'm glad you thought to put in your Shikai in Bankai things to limit your character's speed, and you are to be commended for that, which is part of the reason I'm going to accept your Shikai and Bankai.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:14 am

Remove the deined abilities from your Custom techniques, make the appropriate modifications, and this profile is good to go.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:13 pm

Ok, edited it.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:49 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane Hataro    Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:51 pm

When you remove the WIP from the profile name I'll move it into the Approved Characters section. Until then you can rp whenever and wherever you like.
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